womanslove

thanks for visiting and for your nice comment!

As you were, me too in responding to your comment! sorr

KB

Zorba,

thanks for visiting and for your nice comment!

Krishna Baalu

Though one of my  previous poem "My besttt friend who left such a pain........." was about my feelings for my demised  friend. Though my note was not that upbeat, but neverthless not on downslide too! you can visit and read that one too, besides my many others!

KrishnaBaalu

swarajya

thanks for visiting and your nice comment!

True the mood of the poet must be on the upbeat! only then he can deliver. 

Even pessimism should have an upbeat mind and soul.

when we are optimistic then it is euphoric.

KrishnaBaalu

NAVAL LANGA,

Thanks for visiting and your nice comment!
True we have to look around with emotions from our inner mind and only then we can see the divine vibrations in the nature in every flutter and whisper!

KrishnaBaalu

The mood of the poet must be  on the upbeat.He seems to be in a positive frame of mind and finds everything rosy.Healthy body only may have a healthy mind.One can see God in nature under such a pleasant settings.
I liked the poem.

Krishnabaalujee,

Deriving every pleasure

From every whisper and fragrance

The creator, the almighty god, has given us every reason for enjoying the nature and be happy. Only we have to look around with an emotions in our eyes.

             Naval Langa

Dear Rama Rao garu

At the outset thanks for visiting and postining the comment!

Thanks too, for your opinion on the theme of my poem.

I respectfully beg to differ with your view point. what i tried to describe was a sub-urban remote colony in a drizzling evening. I had exeperienced the odd smell of burning rubber scrap with other frangrances. May be the odd combination of odors may sound of of tune, but it is a fact.


Coming to "Factory chimny' ,  i just said that the tall chimney tower as appeared at the back drop in a "silhouette", but never said to mean smoke is emitting.

Yes! lonelyness is from our perspective! when I was sitting alone without any friend and family member at that point of time with me, I felt lonelyness! but consoled  my self later feeling the GOD in the ambience.

thanks ! for your visit, as you are one among the best blogger on sulekha! 

I keep learning from your learned views nowonwards! I am glad you offered your frank comments sir,

KrishnaBaalu

My dear krishnabaalu garu,
If u permit me let me point out some contradictions in ur verse.
1. burning smell of rubber scrap seems to be out of synch with the ambience and fragrances described. Monsoon winds dont bring such smells. Even factory chimneys! I doubt.

2. When u were seeing God everywhere how could u feel lonely? Seeing God has always been the ultimate aim of every man.

3. U were complaining of lonliness and yet deriving pleasure with a request to Him to keep it that way.

This is not to say that ur poetry is not nice.

Ramarao.

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! This is really beautiful and touching write..KB ( sorry i am late )